Shirley J. Adult Fiction Elder Care Facility, Tortoises, Bikers & Tats, Dating Services
The actual story here is a good one, it just kept getting lost in the constant mental sexually frustrated meanderings of the gal telling the story. When kept to the actual telling of the story I liked the book but it got really disgusting with this chick's constant blathering and fantasizing. The story is about an elder care facility for the monetarily well-heeled residents, two residents in particular who are looking for an aide to assist them and the family who owns the facility and their intentions for its future. There is an endangered species of tortoise on the grounds, there are sibling rivalries, there are first impressions then the reality of who the characters turn out to be. The story is a good one, and I would give high marks for it and wish there had been more of the actual story but the incessant constant babbling and rambling on and on gal who is so ready to explode because she is dying for an orgasm is just a waste of this story's potential. Also when the obvious is so often right there and the lead female character acts as though she is too dumb or too naive to get it is also a slap in the reader's face. When everything is right in front of you but all you want to do is think about how you want to ravish and be ravished then when the offer is put out there and she recoils and acts indignent. I did not like this lead character but I really liked the story. I cannot recommend this book to anyone because the gal is so awful she is insulting. If the writer could do a sequel and continue with the good parts and leave her out completely then it would make a good story. I did like every other character but the lead.
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