The Plot
by Jean Hanff Korelitz 336
pages
This is one time that I
did not pick up a novel based on its cover art; the title was enough to capture
my attention. And then I learned that it was a novel-within-a-novel about
writers. Just up my alley!
It was fun to journey to
a small college and its MFA program, even if said program isn’t that good. I have an MFA from a great program here in
St. Louis. A quick stroll down memory
lane reminded me of the hours and hours I spent with my peers discussing writing
and publishing. Or the hours and hours I spent crafting short stories that were
just okay. But enough about me,
The protagonist is Jake Bonner;
well Jacob Finch Bonner is the name on his first novel that was well accepted
with decent reviews. Sales were okay, but not huge. His second novel was a
flop. He’s hasn’t published anything in years and cannot seem to find a plot or
write anything with any substance. He’s resorted to teaching, consulting with
other writers on how to make their work better and editing.
The fall semester is
about underway at a small Vermont college. Jake is not looking forward to
reading the pages his soon-to-be-students have turned in for his critique. I
can see him running his hand through his hair in despair as he begins prepping
for the course.
One of the students,
Evan Parker, is an obnoxious elitist who believes that his “plot” will take the
world by storm. I was never sure why Evan was in the program, as he thought he
has “the plot” that would make him rich and successful. Although he is reluctant
to divulge his sure-fire hit, he does give Jake a brief synopsis. And Jake is
highly impressed.
Jake waits for Evan to
finish the novel and dreads the fame that will surely be garnished on him. But
as the years go by, Jake never hears anything about Evan Parker, or Parker Evan,
as he considers using his inverted names as a pen name. One afternoon, Jake
decides to Google Evan. It isn’t too long before he discovers that Evan has
died. Jake doesn’t know if the book is finished or if was ever written.
Desperate for a hit,
Jake takes Evan’s idea and writes a blockbuster. I feel like author Korelitz
tried to pull one over on readers---ideas cannot be copyrighted. In fact there are
only four basic plot lines in all of writing. Even is Jake ‘stole’ the idea, he
would never be able to write the same story as Evan.
As I read, I kept thinking
about Korelitz’s story the same way Jake thought about many of his students’---so
what? This novel is hailed as a thriller,
but all I could think was so what? Oh
sure, once Jake hit the big time, he started getting cryptic texts that were
supposed to cause fear that someone knew that he had stolen Evan’s “idea.” But
Jake’s fear wasn’t worthy of the word.
I found “The Plot”
repetitive and boring. As far as the novel that Jake/Evan wrote, it was also
dull. If you like the novel-within-a-novel formats try Margaret Atwood’s “The
Blind Assassin.” Unlike “The Plot,” which
receives 1 out of 5 stars in Julie’s world, it’s a page turner.